Hi Mason, he Harmony i Tautoro kura toku ingoa,tino koa ahau tou pehepehe e pā ana ki te hoiho, ko koe tino hoiho he ngako, kore i kite ahau i rongo e pā ana ki te hoiho ngako ranei, nga hoiho e taea anake te titiro ngako, ka e he ratou he tamaiti ranei i whanau tūmārō hanga. He tino rerekē ki taata rite, kai, haere, wahi te tinana me te ake hoiho. Ka taea e koe te whakapai ake mā te whakauru i ētahi atu mōhiohio e pā ana ki hōiho ranei aha koutou kaupapa ko e pā ana ki a tapae tika koutou kupu.Koutou Faka'apa'apa Harmony.
Hi Mason, my name is Harmony from Tautoro School,I really enjoyed your poem about horses, are you sure horse a fat, I have never seen or heard about a fat horse, horses can only look fat when they are having a baby or were born stocky built. Horses are very different to Humans like, Eating, Walking, body parts and more. You can improve by inserting more information about Horses or what your topic is about and present your words properly.Your Sincerely Harmony.